Writing Process Do your students know the difference between revising and editing? This post explains why it matters - and has ideas for teaching them the difference! The fruit salad activity for first or second grade is the best!
5 Effective Strategies for Teaching K-2 Students to Edit Their Writing
aligned with Common Core Writing Standards 1 & 2 - I would switch the roof and foundation. I think it makes more sense to build from the bottom up. The topic sentence should be the foundation and the closing sentence should protect your paragraph.