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My business article layout. Please can you give me feedback for improvement.  Thank you.

My business article layout. Please can you give me feedback for improvement.

This is my Designer Profile double page spread. Can you give me some advice, and opinions as we all need to have a coherent aesthetic throughout the magazine.

This is my Designer Profile double page spread. Can you give me some advice, and opinions as we all need to have a coherent aesthetic throughout the magazine.

For Haidee again

For Haidee again

Haidee

Haidee

For haidee

For Haidee again

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tried it more of a naturally colour to tie in with the cover

green

tried it more of a naturally colour to tie in with the cover

pale yellow

tried it more of a naturally colour to tie in with the cover

tried it more of a naturally colour to tie in with the cover

tried it more of a naturally colour to tie in with the cover

so i've finalised the layout for the q's just trying to do the coulours need people opinions

so i've finalised the layout for the q's just trying to do the coulours need people opinions

this is the q's with spaces underneath the question before the answer and i really think does not look great and you cant see the correlation between question and answer directly

this is the q's with spaces underneath the question before the answer and i really think does not look great and you cant see the correlation between question and answer directly

This is how i think the Q's should be with the questions in bold ( although not sure it looks like they are in this picture but  they are lol) with the answer directly under it in the regular font

This is how i think the Q's should be with the questions in bold ( although not sure it looks like they are in this picture but they are lol) with the answer directly under it in the regular font

I have tried different scales, and turning them to look as though someone has scattered them.

I have tried different scales, and turning them to look as though someone has scattered them.

just wondering what you think to the font I've used for the website address

just wondering what you think to the font I've used for the website address

1st very quick attempt of the layout for the back page not final fonts just thought i'd try something a bit more interesting than the two parts straight across the centre of the page what do you all think

very quick attempt of the layout for the back page not final fonts just thought i'd try something a bit more interesting than the two parts straight across the centre of the page what do you all think

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